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andrew donaldsonfeedback please?
by on Jan 27, 2014 at 4:19:29 pm

Hi Cow peeps,

Im a fairly experienced editor that picked up C4D a year or so ago.
I've gotten quite familiar with it now, but have no colleagues here to bounce ideas off. More importantly I have no idea how long it should take (it seems to take me a long time).

From sketches and rough drafts, I made this in about 5 days:

Obviously, the most time consuming part was being happy with all the elements (i made 3 different scenes before i was happy with this one, etc.), not to mention getting the light and textures right.

If you were my client and it took me the best part of a week to deliver this (from scratch) would this be acceptable?

Cheers y'all!

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Arndt von KoenigsmarckRe: feedback please?
by on Jan 28, 2014 at 2:23:07 pm

Hi Andrew,
I like it. Just in the beginning I was a little confused by the grid in the background, because not all black lines align at the roof, but no big deal.

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andrew donaldsonRe: feedback please?
by on Jan 28, 2014 at 3:33:38 pm


Thanks for the feedback! I didn't like the beginning at all to be honest, but couldn't think up something else in time!

The ceiling tiles are actually floating under the 'real' ceiling which is why they don't line up properly, but i suppose i should have realised that it wouldn't come across with the DOF, etc.

Thanks for taking the time to look.

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