I am seeing some good stuff in this reel. I think the main challenge for you is to decide who you are. This feels like a reel that doesn't know what it wants to be - Mograph, Camera, Editor? It feels like it's mostly mograph but your slate at the beginning indicates camera/editor. I would focus it on the thing you do well and go with it.
However, the job im in just now forces me to do everything (since im the only one in the department!) so I suppose i dabble in everything.
The mograph stuff sort of spawns from quiet days in the office, but i don't want to portray myself as a motion graphics designer (probably because i don't rate myself). So i would probably rather focus on editing to be honest.
Although saying that, I'll soon be moving to New Zealand where i think opportunities for work might force me not to be too choosy about either discipline!