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Steve Kownacki
Re: What did I do wrong in this sequence?
on Feb 23, 2012 at 3:37:38 pm

I think you need to highlight the "little ones on the bottom" maybe with an arrow or darken the screen except for a circle around it. I didn't know where to look so I was looking at the yellow light on top thinking "they're all the same size"; you may need to hold the shots longer so you can read and absorb the titles and give me time to relate it to the video.

Perhaps the shot at 13:28 could be from the left of the driver as he looks to the "little light" showing relation of height to the driver's eyeline.

13:35 need to show relation of the front of the car with regard to the light. The shot at 13:25 shows the white minivan clearly past the imaginary line - can you put a graphic line on the screen where he should have stopped, roughly his rear wheels?

Took me 4 times to watch and read to understand. If I were in the traffic business (municipal planners or engineers for instance) I would totally get what you are showing. As a layman, took a few views to get it.


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