Hi Jordon,
I'd say it's generally rather random. There isn't really any sense of narrative to it, just people running around trying to shoot each other. What is the story? Who are the main characters? Where's the conflict...etc?
A lot of the shots are a little to contrasty as well.
Mike
Michael Folorunsho - Videographer & Editor
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