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Max Schau
My First AE Video - The History Of The Tile
on Mar 5, 2014 at 5:47:48 pm

Hey fellaz, this is my new (and first video) - The History Of The Tile. It is an ad for an Australian tile cleaning company and I was wondering what do you think about it and what else does it need?





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Joseph W. Bourke
Re: My First AE Video - The History Of The Tile
on Mar 5, 2014 at 6:14:17 pm

Not bad for a first outing! A couple of nasty typos in the early part of the video. I'm not going to tell you what they are, since you should have caught them before posting the video - that's a critical part of any production in which typography plays a large part.

Other than that, I would suggest maybe a bit more subtle sell early on: maybe something in the terra cotta section that asks "who cleaned all these statues?", or "cleaning the Colosseum must have been quite a job!". I don't think it would be out of place, since the piece is light-hearted.

Joe Bourke
Owner/Creative Director
Bourke Media
http://www.bourkemedia.com


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