Please can the community give me some feedback on color correction, this is for college and I have a deadline for tuesday. I want to enter this into a LGBT short film competition.
The poem is about being intersex* and is a poem directed toward to priest Thomas Aquinas (who was a person who invented the concept of original sin and wrote a lot about what is right and wrong in terms of gender and sexuality which still lingers today)
I wanted to try and communicate a feeling of struggle and difficulty around binary sex determination, this is more at the beginning, but then later with a more positive and spiritual feeling of self love and divinity... I know the color is a bit rough around the edges, could do with some tips or advice.
*(if you want to know more about what intersex is go here: isna.org/faq/what_is_intersex)