I think your reel is way too long. If most people are like me they work long hours and don't want to sit around and watch people's reels. I would make it a 1-2 minutes long. I would also start with some of your moving city timelapse footage. I think it is much more engaging than the timelapse you started with. Best of luck.
Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. I agree also on the length. I have been debating on cutting that shorter no doubt especially as the attention spans get shorter. LOL. Also agreed on the time lapse vs hyper lapse footage. Thank you a million for the feedback again. Much appreciated.