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Steven Jenkins
2010 Showreel 3d Mograph - Critique Plz
on Aug 10, 2010 at 3:18:24 pm

I do some light freelancing and volunteer work. I'd like some good constructive criticism to help me continue improving.

Thanks!

2010 Showreel from Steven Jenkins on Vimeo.





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Kevin Cannon
Re: 2010 Showreel 3d Mograph - Critique Plz
on Sep 1, 2010 at 5:24:06 am

Hey Steven,
The thing that jumps out at me is that your bumper at the top with the pool table isn't nearly as well lit as what follows. The reflections and highlights in the balls don't have much life, the green isn't too vivid...then boom - the next thing is the soccer logo which is great. I would just consider reworking the bumper to get it up to par...

Cheers,

KC


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