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Jordan Tan
Can you Critique my Trailer?
on Aug 6, 2010 at 6:15:33 pm

Hi, I work with a small amateur film group called JBR Pro.

We just made our first fairly long film, called Vitality.

I edited the first trailer and want to see what pros or anybody would think.

Done with After Effects and Action Essentials, along with some other plug-ins.

Thanks!



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Michael Folorunsho
Re: Can you Critique my Trailer?
on Aug 19, 2010 at 6:32:18 pm

Hi Jordon,

I'd say it's generally rather random. There isn't really any sense of narrative to it, just people running around trying to shoot each other. What is the story? Who are the main characters? Where's the conflict...etc?

A lot of the shots are a little to contrasty as well.

Mike




Michael Folorunsho - Videographer & Editor
http://www.mikedoesmedia.com


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