There's too much of the band on the roof, try to put less of the same things repeatedly. There was one psychedelic effect that looks retro in a bad way, can't tell how to direct you to the specific one. The rock climbing stuff and a few other shots look very flat/un-corrected color. The shot of the guy with the white fuzzy light around him looks cheap. Personally I find the song to be really annoying, but that's certainly preferential.