FORUMS: list search recent posts

critique please!

COW Forums : Demo Reels

<< PREVIOUS   •   VIEW ALL   •   PRINT   •   NEXT >>
christian wynne
critique please!
on Apr 9, 2008 at 11:36:04 pm


hey,

Ive been working on a title for a project i'm doing. This is the first title i've made and i would like some feedback. You guys are the pro's so your honest opinion please, after all i want to learn! Any suggestions would be most welcome to, thanks in advance. The animated flourishes are from Andrew Kramer's evolution dvd and the title plate from one of his tutorials.

(note res is bad because of youtube..)








Return to posts index

Rory Brennan
Re: critique please!
on Apr 10, 2008 at 4:54:30 pm

Nice!
I would probably speed the whole thing up and make the type larger.

RB

Rory Brennan
Editor
New York City

"Have a nice day!"


Return to posts index

derek nagle
Re: critique please!
on Apr 10, 2008 at 6:46:04 pm

this is cool, i think def speed it up font a bit more centered, ??

how did u make this??



Return to posts index


Brandon Withrow
Re: critique please!
on Apr 24, 2008 at 4:21:40 pm

Very cool! I dig the style.
One thing, you might want to ease out of the move on the Title card. It kinda stops dead in its tracks when it reaches center screen.



Return to posts index

<< PREVIOUS   •   VIEW ALL   •   PRINT   •   NEXT >>
© 2018 CreativeCOW.net All Rights Reserved
[TOP]