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Nathan Skillen
Feedback wanted on show promo
on Mar 10, 2008 at 6:05:03 am

Hey, made this clip while working on a new demo reel.

Just a mock-up, not actually for CBC. Want some feedback / ways to improve.

http://www.preposterous.ca/showpromo.mov (4 MB preview quality)

Thanks!


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Colin McQuillan
Re: Feedback wanted on show promo
on Mar 11, 2008 at 4:01:05 am

IMHO:
The timing of the fading-in bg's are off. Either have them fade in together, or figure something else out ie: slide in the red bar then fade in the black bar,, but I think a simple fade in unison would work best.
I'd also fade in the "New Episode" after "Heros" has made its move or at the same time as '8 pt/9 ct"

As far as design goes it looks fine. Just gotta time out the moves and fades a little better. As is, each element has a mind of its own,, something like this should feel more unified, or connected,, if you get what I mean,,,

any hu,, my thoughts!
Cheers!



Colin McQuillan
Vancouver BC


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