well, its just a very rough draft and the opening slate is awful, but please give me feedback on the work itself. I'm about to graduate in May, but I've only been focusing on Motion Graphics for about 3 months. (I switched from Visual FX, got bored with roto)
Yes. Definitely get rid of your beginning and ending slate. Don't even have them on there. Good stuff though...The only other suggestions I would have is to stick the skate stuff together...Only because of the repeating shot...If your slate had a culmination of pieces intermingling, then it would be ok, but it seems to be the only piece that repeats.
Oh, and why not put some of your best visual FX stuff in as well...Show that you are well balanced.