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Jeremy Doyle
"The Deputy" short film
on May 23, 2007 at 6:14:20 pm

I made this short film last weekend as part of the Fargo 48 hour film festival. I'd love to hear thoughts and opinions. My skin is thick so don't hold back.







I drew western for the genre
character was tony or toni west, security guard
prop was a water bottle
line of dialogue was "I can't believe you just said that"

Jeremy


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blakep
Re: "The Deputy" short film
on May 30, 2007 at 6:01:48 pm

Congrats on your work!

Good framing, appealing story, nice lighting.

Voice & dialog over too quite at times (fought with the music). The guy hanging need to tilt head to side a touch (broken neck). ...Would consider a sepia-tone filter through out movie. The revelation of the young boy might be a better opening to the movie. The story-line was a little too disjointed for me.
Good luck
Blake


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