It was OK. I think you have talent. Bolgers..It was OK. Was cut well together. The only thing that didn't look right was the guy throwing his hands up at the very end. It looked unnatural... not quite right.
The rest was Ho-Hum, but Ok. The spoon thing kinda bothered me somehow.
But again, I can see you have talent.
Thank you for your response! The guy throwing his hands in the air (me)was overacted on purpose in honor of those lame "hidden-cam" Folgers commercials I had seen as a kid. The spoon shot is jarring because it is the only shot that is not locked down, I would have done it differently if done again...Thanks again for the input!
I just realized you are referring to the "spoon-cam" shots at the end of the demo! That entire production was an excercise in complete goofiness with a bunch of sight gags, the "spoon-cam" being the kicker in the end....there is something weird about it though!