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hanza1
demoreel draft
on Mar 20, 2007 at 1:44:33 am

Hi,

I just made first rough draft of my new demoreel
and I'd like to hear your comments while I'm still
working on it.
I'll be cutting it down from 120sec to 90 sec and
throwing some stuff away. I'm also going to fix
some cuts in editing which are not on the beat.

Comments please :)

Tnx,
Hanza

p.s. please download it from
http://www.sirruf.com/reel07_draft.mov

Quicktime, Sorenson video 3, 16.8 Mb, 120 sec





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Heather Crank
Re: demoreel draft
on Mar 21, 2007 at 1:48:16 am

Still could be shorter. I think that it would help showing the spots for shorter periods of time. Don't show the washing machine twice, I get it the first time. Nice work!


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AEstorm
Re: demoreel draft
on Mar 21, 2007 at 9:50:36 am

I liked it nice work, music is very catchy too i am sure i was tapping my feet lol.



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hanza1
new draft
on Mar 21, 2007 at 7:39:08 am


I reduced it to 80 sec and introduced new music at 37th sec.
I still have to do some tweaking in editing and few animation
clips to fix and mix the music.
If you're interested you can see my demoreel in stage2:

http://www.sirruf.com/reel07_draft2.mov
(Quicktime, Sorenson Video 3, 320x240, 9.6Mb, 80 sec)
I'd love to hear any comments.


BTW, what's correct way to spell - Demoreel or Demo Reel?

Tnx,
Goran




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Heather Crank
Re: new draft
on Mar 22, 2007 at 1:54:54 am

It's definitely better. I suggest not showing the washing machine twice. I'd also keep of the yellow with the black letters on their for half the time.

Nice job!

Heather


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hanza1
Re: new draft
on Mar 22, 2007 at 7:27:58 am


Hi Heather,

you really don't like washing mashines ;))
Yes, I agree about yellow part, It's lenght doesn't really
add to the dynamics of that part. Animation by itself isn't
that representative so it doesn't work that well in reel as
when it's on it's own (you can see the whole piece at
http://www.sirruf.com/killbill_teaser.mov).

Thanks for your comments, I really appreciate them.

Best,
Goran



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greg
Re: new draft
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on Mar 23, 2007 at 7:57:28 pm

Nice reel...The washing machine doesn't bother me, except that it remnds me it's time to do some laundry...lol

I love the music and the way you cut the reel together with the music. I also agree on the yellow. Nice job!


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hanza1
Re: new draft
on Mar 23, 2007 at 11:15:58 pm

Thanks for your comments.


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hanza1
Demoreel finished
on Mar 23, 2007 at 11:19:38 pm


I finished my demoreel and you can see it at
http://www.sirruf.com along with some of my other motion graphics.
(that also means that links to draft versions don't work anymore).

Thanks for all your comments.


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