Nice looking stuff. I think your shooting style and editing are nicely done. Love your use of jib shots. Perhaps you need a couple of higher energy cuts in your demo. Have you done any corporate events, meeting openers, something more fun? That would help.
thanks for the feedback. I was focusing on actual work product and most of my corporate work has been dry. I've got some other clips that I can include. I think the high energy stuff is exactly what I'm missing. I'm going to recut with a more upbeat intro.
Oh yeah...I love the jib.