I like the music, my only comment is that 5 min's is a bit long. I was done, around the 2.5 -3 min mark.
For the parameters you had with the piece and the amount of time invested it looked good. The footage has much potential.
But again, just a bit long.
Only my opinion
It's a runway reel so it has to be one complete show. We want the next gig so were not going to give them half of their show... They told us that they felt it was too short but we still got the contract.