I think your reel looks great, good job. The audio was a really nice touch and the motion graphics looked really slick. The only thing I could think of would be maybe when the videos play could they work themselves into full screen? That would be the only suggestion I could think of just because some of the clips were hard to make out because of their size.
Thanks for the input. I set this up in After effects so it's not like it would be a big deal to dolly in a little bit with the camera to make each movie screen bigger. I'll keep that in mind when I redesign or make a new reel.