Hey, well, I tried getting feedback a few weeks back, and wasn't very successful, so, I used my own judgment and tried to syphon out as much as I thought was unnecessary. It's now half the size, and consists of mostly new material as well.
Hey man, I know the feeling some times you get a lot of replies, sometimes nothing..
Checking out you reel, it's good. but i would get rid of the part when the (for a lack of a better word) man walks down the stair, looks over and sits on the chair. Just use the siting on chair and flaming on..