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Tiddles
1st Cartoon Effort - Need Feedback
on Dec 3, 2005 at 10:34:19 pm

Hi all,

This is my 1st cartoon effort - The Adventures of Bob.

Feedback would be very helpful!

Please take a look - its only a small file....

http://dhost.info/tiddles/bob.wmv

Thanks..


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Yussef
Re: 1st Cartoon Effort - Need Feedback
on Dec 4, 2005 at 1:44:58 am

couldn't get on - 404 error..


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Tiddles
Re: 1st Cartoon Effort - Need Feedback
on Dec 4, 2005 at 11:13:11 am

Hey - I tested the link and it is working. I am unsure why you did not see it.

Try this link - http://dhost.info/tiddles

It's the 1st video on that page.

Thanks for taking the time,
Tiddles.


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Yussef
Re: 1st Cartoon Effort - Need Feedback
on Dec 5, 2005 at 6:30:16 pm

fun stuff, a little violent for kids though eh? only thing is the character, being drawn with a pencil, looks very different from his his res 3d surroundings. you might try either cleaning him up or dirtying the environment down so the elements match better.



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Tiddles
Re: 1st Cartoon Effort - Need Feedback
on Dec 6, 2005 at 11:57:12 am

hey Yussef,

thanks for taking the time, i really do appreciate your thoughts.

your comment about the character design is a valid one. i was going for a distinct contrast between the character and his surroundings - partly because i wanted to have a somewhat unique feel to this cartoon, but mostly because i'm really NO artist :)

as this was just a test, i have no problem going back to the drawing board (um.. so to speak).

cheers!


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seattlefilmmaker
Re: 1st Cartoon Effort - Need Feedback
on Jan 5, 2006 at 7:50:39 pm

I didn't watch it. Know why? TOO SLOW. It was taking a VERY long time to get it downloaded. You might wanna switch to something faster.

-E

"Any man's death diminishes me, because I am involved in mankind, and therefore never send to know for whom the bells tolls; it tolls for thee."

-John Donne


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