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Eyal Elbaz
Please critic my first reel
on Oct 29, 2005 at 11:53:56 am

Hi,

i've been practicing with After Effects for sevral months now.
i made a reel of the stuff i made to hopefully help me find my first job.
i would appriciate any criticizim and suggestions.
a friend of mine told me i have to throw away the all seconde part of the reel.

http://www.eyal.uni.cc

Thanks


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Eyal Elbaz
This is the link
on Oct 29, 2005 at 5:58:07 pm

this is the link
http://www.eyal.uni.cc


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Brian24DP
Re: This is the link
on Oct 29, 2005 at 10:09:12 pm

Nice reel... couple sugestions, i liked everything up to the second NBA shot, where it says 'i love it' - dumpt it, it doesnt look professional. I would get rid of everything after that except for the explostion at the end.
Even though it will be really short, the other stuff looks good and got my attention.

cheers


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Eyal Elbaz
Re: This is the link
on Oct 30, 2005 at 10:01:30 pm

Thanks Brian,

did you mean i have to take down the "i love it" text from the second nba shot, or the all second shot?
you didn't find the explosion look amture? my friend told me it's patethic and made me not sure about it.
BTW Brian,I got the inspiration for the animated camera from you (the kitchen in your reel) i hope you don't mind :)

I'd love yo hear more suggestions from you guys.

Thanks,
Eyal


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Trevor Ward
Re: Please critic my first reel
on Oct 31, 2005 at 3:58:51 pm

I agree. "I love it" does not compare to quality of rest of reel. After the NBA section, delete all, even explosions. Not of the same quality as rest.


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Tim
Re: Please critic my first reel
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on Oct 31, 2005 at 4:52:27 pm

I know this is kinda picky, buy you might want to actually spell "quicktime" correctly on your website. This could be an immediate and initial turn-off for potential clients.



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Robert Houghton
Re: Please critic my first reel
on Oct 31, 2005 at 5:20:53 pm

I rather liked it. It's better than some of the reels I've seen from students who have spent a similar amount of time in school. I would agree with the others about modifying the NBA section. Keep the rotoscope of the player jumping and shouting but lose the font in front of it. You can cut out of it earlier then. It doesn't keep the energy of the shot going.


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Eyal Elbaz
Re: Please critic my first reel
on Nov 1, 2005 at 9:03:44 pm

Thanks guys for your time and suggestions.


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