Not quite sure about what you're showing here. Looks more like something my dad shhots back in the early 1960's while he tried to figure out his film camera. I'd suggest that you try lighting your shots better and work on creative angles.
unfortunately this was my first time using a non-digital camera. and due to weather and other discrepencies, i only had ONE day to learn how to use the camera and shoot. i knew i needed a lot of lighting, but didn't realize how much until i got the film back. though i think this was a good first try. it was just something shot for school.