yes, the editing part... i was trying to create the excitement by shots of excited people, and flow of movement in shots. But i guess variety of different shots (no shared style, like you said) cancelled that out. Maybe i should put one of my edited piece up there. would you be intrested in watching that?
And titles, i'm glad you like it. Sad to say though not all of them were designed by me. lots of them are, but some of them I get .eps or .ai file and created the movement from that. like the one says "drive". I'll think about showing the process in the reel.
And i saw your demo. I liked it. It definitely shows your editing skill and style. TV monitor design, i like that too. It played with no problem on my G5 (verizon DSL)