This will ultimately be published on DVD, with links to Broadcast, Spots, Graphics, and Corporate/Educational, so that people will be able to see complete segments and spots.
For you music licensing devotees, please be aware that 1) This is a work-in-progress, and 2) I am pursuing all available channels to get permission to use this piece of music. If your *only* comment on the demo is "do you have permission to use this music", then, please... keep it to yourself. If you have *other* comments, I'd love to hear them!
Sweet, nice stuff. Left me wanting to see more and learn of what you did on the highlighted segments. I would look further.
I like your opening tag, but I would make it much shorter, as I am sure they will have your name on the DVD and attached paperwork, no need to have long title slate especially with the cool material that you have ...
I like the overall length
Nice use of "Up-Nats" within your montage...i always want more of this but that is me, maybe break into the music with a cool Up Nat that changes the pace and establishes your advance editing style and understanding of pacing...that music is perfect to stop the action allow a Up Nat to seat and then jump right back in...just an idea, give a second to breath
Nice, good idea with the DVD and extended excerpts...I would look
Yeah, the opening graphic *does* feel a little long. Actually, an earlier version was shorter, but the movement didn't feel as right... When I author the DVD, maybe you just see it the first time you put the disk in... not sure.
I like your idea of Up-Nats, breaking into the music... I might try playing with that.
All footage is from programs I edited, and all GFX are mine (with the exception of the Jack Hanna title card... I did not do that open, but I feel it has to be in there for identification purposes).
No, I'm not currently in LA... although I am looking at a relocation to either Southern or Northern California - more details can be found here: