Thanks to all who helped.
by Malcolm Man
on
Sep 10, 2007 at 8:31:52 pm
Just wanted to post this final spot and thank all thoase who helped, which include: Moldy Boot, Yikes Mike, Dave LaRonde, Lifetype, Steve Roberts, Maltaannon, and probably many more.
Re: Thanks to all who helped. by malcolm man on Sep 11, 2007 at 12:58:26 pm
I shot all the green screen elements in one day, created all the graphics over the period of one week, and then took one additional week to complete all editing.
Thanks for the input. I might make them a wee bit smaller.
Re: Thanks to all who helped. by bogiesan on Sep 11, 2007 at 1:57:12 pm
Great work. Congratulations on a fine execution.
We could nit pick all day, just ask a barber if he thinks you need a haircut. Save each version but only keep tweaking till you're happy.
The telling question: Did the client pay your invoice?
Re: Thanks to all who helped. by Dave LaRonde on Sep 11, 2007 at 2:43:41 pm
Nice going! Looks good! I hope the client likes it.
I can see one thing that the client might not like, however. Around :13 or :14, there's a transition from a wallpapered room to a white painted room. Everything transitions nicely except the green stripe near the ceiling: it just ends on a cut. Taking the rest of the transition into account, it's too abrupt. You fix that, and you got it made.
Then it's just down to matters of personal taste: "Don't you think the cabinet is too green at the end?" "No, because if I did, I wouldn't have done it." You know the litany.
