Re: My Animation & motion graphics Reel 2009 by William Mims on Nov 7, 2009 at 1:41:14 pm
Mohammad:
Wow, that is some of the most dynamic graphic work I have seen. What a beautiful blend of the two languages, and the way you used graphical symbols to marry the two, just really well done. I have but one criticism, and that is that the music is leading the cuts by about four frames. Meaning you are not 'cutting on the beat'. If you will adjust the music by adding four (or so) frames to the picture or start the music four frames later, I think you will see that as each new "scene" starts, the music will have that change at the same place and it will just seem a lot cleaner. Great work and I look forward to seeing more of your dynamic style!
And I see that you have just join "us" at Creative Cow. Welcome, and thanks for joining, I know you will be a valuable asset to our group.
My Animation & motion graphics Reel 2009 by Mohammad Naveed Khawar on Nov 9, 2009 at 9:23:56 am
Thank you MIMS, I really like that you have planted your expert look at my show reel and I do agree with you suggestion that some frames would make difference at visual cutting points with music. I have some new stuff which is not merged in it, soon I will update it and I hope then music will perfectly adjust. In future I would like you to look at my work with the same passion.
If you want to see Titles, promo and channel Ids' separately watch my vimeo channel.
Re: My Animation & motion graphics Reel 2009 by Simon Stutts on Nov 21, 2009 at 10:09:34 pm
I'd get rid of the video-copilot tutorial look-alike piece...the rest of your work is high quality - don't bring it down by including an obvious tutorial effect.
