|  | Re: Updated Demo Reel - Constructive Criticism Please
by William Mims on Oct 9, 2009 at 1:32:27 pm |
Stephen:
Wow! I mean, WOW!
I like your music choice, I like the pace, the rhythm of the cuts, your cutting on the beat looks to be right on. What can I say? If I needed something like this, I would hire you in a heartbeat! One of the first things you want to do in a trailer for a movie is make people want to see the film. As I watched your "Trailer" my thought was: Hmmm, what is this about? I would like to see the rest of this movie. So although it is a demo reel the sections come from some longer project, so the cuts you selected are like a trailer for a movie that people will want to see. Was the kid kidnapped? Was the transit the construction worker was working, really a gun aimed at the human target in the next cut? All very interesting questions raised in the minds of the viewer-which is what you want to create, and you have done that very well. Heck, screw the demo reel-MAKE THE MOVIE!!!
Thanks for sharing such excellent work with us. I hope others will take a look!
Much continued success.
Mims
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