Re: Trying to do a dubbing - what am I doing wrong?

That could use a small room reverb send and some room tone mixed in the background. EQing some of the bass out will make the mic position more believable, as this sounds very close-mic'ed. One often overlooked but very important thing is foley. You don't have to do too much, just recording a few clothes movements to mix in faintly with the dialog. Just a tad of foley can really help gel things together when you mix in your hard effects. When mixing in foley, when you start hearing it, just pull it back a little.

JC Boulay
Audio Z
Montreal, Canada
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