Re: Adrift - UW conservation film

I loved the footage. Consider how you placed your musical crescendos and decrescendos, since I didn't get them at first. I would have liked to see your message a little sooner.

Your client definitely has a compelling story to tell. Maybe you could tell the story just a little faster, and add punctuation to each point your client wants to make. Consider using music as an exclamation, or as a comma, to help your story.

I know this type of project takes a lot of time and effort, so I applaud your work on this. I free dive, so I've seen some of these things first hand, both the beauty and the destruction. Nice video.



from the Flamingo Las Vegas,

TJ McCormick