Re: Demo Reel - Constructive Criticism Please

Stephen: I just ran across this thread and wanted to add some thoughts.Several have made some really good suggestions, especially Ron, who said to cut to the music. That is so vital and I think he explained it in a better way than I would, but I have always called it "cutting on the beat". You must cut on the beat. Dave also had a good suggestion about the titles being spread out through the piece, although I might disagree with him on the style-I liked the look a lot. I was always taught that film (video) is a flat screen so never shoot flat space, instead give it some depth. Your opening graphics do just that, the 3d look you show works really well and I think you've done an outstanding job with those choices. Now go back and reread Ron's explanation of cutting on the beat and get your music back in "sync" with the cuts and you will be amazed with how much better the action flows. Good Work!

Mims