Re: Demo Reel - Constructive Criticism Please

Hi,

You've got some nice shots in this piece but i'm not clear about what you are presenting. It seems to me that all of the video elements are from the same project but does not communicate to me what you were trying to achieve at each point. The music distracted me a bit and i too would have preferred at least some of the audio from the scenes to help me understand the context of what I am viewing.

Finally on the opening titles the movement works for me but I would choose a different font style that's more classic but current and rearrange them throughout into sections of the piece. The spacing between the fonts could be much tighter, this would bring the typography approach in this piece closer up a notch in my view.

Hope this helps.
Dave Cropper

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