Re: Demo Reel - Constructive Criticism Please

The motion titles are fine at the beginning. By watching your reel, I'm not sure what you are trying to get across. It just looks too random to me. Maybe you should divide into sections like directing, cinematography, editing and vfx. VFX breakdowns are good so maybe have a couple more of those. Cut down on some of the other shots like the 'path in the wood' shot. On some of the edited scenes it might be good to hear the original sound. This is just my gut reaction from watching it. Hope what I say helps.