Re: Post Production Demo Reel

Good day Kim,

First impression, please change the music. It does nothing for the piece other than be quite annoying. To me music either is a background element that weaves in and out or it drives the reel in terms of pacing and timing. The music here does neither. Each section that you go through seems to linger too long. For example the color grading, some of the shots (at least on the web) have very subtle changes, I'd drop those scenes all together. Same with the scenes that come later where you are trying to show your story telling they are very random and getting back to the music, if you had music that fit this section these scenes may be a little bit more compelling.

Over all it is okay a little long too. Keep trying!

Cheers,

John

J. Grote, Jr.