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Re: title sequence
by arnoud delporte on Jul 2, 2008 at 10:45:08 pm

Looks great! Honestly, I can't make this.
If I could, however, I would make the camera move a bit more diversely. I'm seeing the same motion a few too many times. In the first part, all text comes in left to right, which feels 'out of balance'. If the last bit of text would come in right to left, it would be surprising and at the same time balancing.
Also the zooms in the second part should be more diverse IMO. Now it feels as if they all have the same speed and focal distance. Surprise me with a really fast, really long zoom on an important title (I would suggest Halle Berry...)
All that said, I think you did a nice job. But I doubt you posted it to read five variations on 'cool stuff man, keep it up!'
As for the smoke effects, neat work, hat off.



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