Re: Need Critiques

My first impression was: It too long. I wasn't sure I wanted to watch the whole thing.
The opening Color Bars graphics can be done more quickly. The Words on screen, as voice spoke was nice, but again too long. The Marilyn photo thing was pretty cool, but I wondered if the ink in water was an effect done by you? or what?
Perhaps you can take footage you shot and play with blowing it up...Speed it up ... Slow it down.
Capture short clips-start with it blown way up, then cut to nornal size play with speed then out and to the next one... Kind of making motion graphics out of plan old footage. Nail it to the beat..

Beter to be short with lots of action, than too long because you don't have much.
Anyhow good effort!!
Blake