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Re: Opinion on my landing page...
by walter biscardi on Mar 11, 2008 at 12:31:21 am

Folks have already commented on some of the things they didn't like. I definitely agree on too much text and that's actually something we're working on right now with my site re-design.

What I find is that you're a creative company, but the site comes across as very corporate, bland and un-creative. If the site is supposed to sell you as a creative company, the site should at least look creative.

Lose all scrolling, everything should be on one page.

Grey on white in all squares is definitely a corporate look. You look more like a bank than a creative company.

The Demo Reel is kind of weird too. You have independent films and Special FX following a medical video demonstration. If I'm looking to post a film, I would probably think twice after seeing a medical demonstration video.

One thing I don't have on my site is a demo reel anymore. I have specific videos which the potential client can look through.

Websites are not the easiest thing to create, especially when you're running the business too. Also, by hiring someone who only does only websites, I was given a lot of advice by her as to what to do and not do on the site. We're going to spend about 6 months total completely re-designing my site.

Definitely streamline the site, lose the scrolling, lose a lot of text and think about working with that demo a bit.







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