Re: List to my song, and Critique please! :)

Sounds great.
Nice style, very guitar forward, deep and passionate. Nice music to listen to. Sounds fun to play..
Critiques.. after the guitar stopped, you lost me. It felt like a half turn around (I was waiting for the guitar to come back, and end the piece).
Some ideas to try. More guitar work by alternating diversity, length and some thicker patterns.
Also try adding another track or two of ornamental guitar like harmonizing some harmonics and adding some soft tremolo bar.
Also try some open tunings like drop 6 to D. Another nice touch would be to try working with and mixing guitars nylon and steel or a twelve string guitar.

I like the passion for the guitar in your playing, that is clear.
Beethoven said, The Guitar is a miniature orchestra in itself.

Check out some Andy McKee on YouTube to hear some nice open tuning guitar. I think you would like that..

Good luck
Bob O'Dell